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发表于 2004-12-06 10:43
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海记不会英语，想看英文网站。无计可施，歪想出泡英文论坛学英语。 大家给点鼓励吧。 今日先来一句，容后再续，每天一句，看看一年之后能否看懂英文商业网站。 英文句子如有不当或错误，各位高手，帮我修改指正啊！多谢啦。 I mainly deal in Knives of Scissors.
修改于2004-12-06 10:43:50
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- 打个招呼 书生二级
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今日续上一句
发表于2004-12-07 17:13
今日续话：
I mainly deal in Knives and scissors. Also deal in knives and sets and labte ware etc.
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是你自己写的吧
发表于2004-12-08 14:20
表面看没有问题，但是感觉很别扭，主要是用词有点牵强。
根据你的意思，我改进如下：
We are special in knives and scissors，also supply .......
简要说明：
1。用WE代替I，I给人感觉是个人，而一般介绍自己的公司，产品等，要以整体形式出现，不会太单薄。
2。DEAL IN：虽然有经营的意思，却不适合用这里
3。前后半句用词要有所变化，谓语不要用同一个词汇
4。后半句节省了主语，和前半句并列成一个句子
仅供参考！
I am back --------AppleKing
是我偷梁换柱而写出的
发表于2004-12-08 16:06
我是从这句改写而来的：
I mainly deal in Chinese crafts.
这是教科书上的句子，但我的改法真不知对是不对。
多谢你的分析，让我好感动。
希望继续帮我分析。十二分感激。
语句修改
发表于2004-12-08 17:32
前面的一句，修改为这样可以吗？
We are special in knives and scissors，also supply in knives sets and tableware etc.
Special 专门，专业
Supply 供应
- GreenGrass
- 打个招呼 秀才三级
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我也说一句
发表于2004-12-08 17:38
supply是及物动词，后面直接加宾语就可以了，不要介词in。之前的in是和deal连在一起的，deal in是一个词组，乃“经营”之意。
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那就要改成这样了
发表于2004-12-08 17:45
We are special in knives and scissors，also supply knives sets and tableware etc.
谢谢你，GreenGrass (不知是称大哥还是妹子）
今天续第三句
发表于2004-12-09 21:09
We are special in knives and scissors，also supply knives sets and tableware etc.
My company is (in) Yangjiang,Guangdong,China.
是用 is 还是用 in 好？多谢各位解答，海记有礼。
My company is (in) Yangjiang,Guangdong,China.
分析如下：
1。第一句已经用了WE，第二句用MY就不合适，MY和I是对应的，而WE应该对应OUR
2。位置可以表示：BE IN（IN不可以省略，所以去掉括号），或者 BE LOCATED IN，但却不能直接用BE动词，否则意思就变成XX 是 YY，而不是XX 位于YY
可以改为：
Our company is in Yangjiang,Guangdong, China
或
Our company is located in Yangjiang,Guangdong, China
I am back --------AppleKing
多谢两位老师
发表于2004-12-12 20:12
真的多谢我的老师。AppleKing和sicon
olcated 是“位置”之类的意思吧。
那么现在是这样的了。
We are special in knives and scissors，
also supply knives sets and tableware etc.
Our company is located in Yangjiang,Guangdong, China
第四句啦
发表于2004-12-12 20:20
再续上一句，多谢各位指正。
We are special in knives and scissors，
also supply knives sets and tableware etc.
Our company is located in Yangjiang,Guangdong, China
Yangjiang is a beautiful seaside city.
Yangjiang is a beau…
发表于2004-12-13 00:41
这句基本上没有问题
你是不是在广东沿江啊，沿江应该是：YANJIANG吧，沿没有后鼻音的。
前面我没有注意。
I am back --------AppleKing
续上第五句
发表于2004-12-13 21:12
今日续第五句，多谢指正，海记有礼！
We are special in knives and scissors，
also supply knives sets and tableware etc.
Our company is located in Yangjiang,Guangdong, China
Yangjiang is a beautiful seaside city.
Produces knives in Yangjiang has been in existence for more than 1000 years.
（阳江生产刀子的历史己有1000多年。）
续到第六句
发表于2004-12-15 13:36
My main products are pocket knives and scissors,
also include the knife sets and tableware, ect.
My company is located in Yangjiang, Guangdong, P. China.
Yangjiang is a beautiful seaside city.
Producing the knives in Yangjiang has been more than 1000 years。
My company was foundcn on 1994 ,
My main products are pocket knives and scissors,
also include the knife sets and tableware, ect.
My company is located in Yangjiang, Guangdong, P. R. China.
Yangjiang is a beautiful seaside city.
Produces knives in Yangjiang has been more than 1000 years.
My company was founded in 1994.
The 10 th anniversary of the founding of the company.(factory).
我想在这地儿占他一年
发表于2004-12-16 17:16
咱们来个相互帮助吧.不过我当前帮不了什么,才开始.我可以问我的网上老师.他们很热心,让我非常感动.
精神可加
发表于2004-12-16 17:37
楼主有胆量把自己的错误暴露出来，精神可加，继续努力，那样子版主们一定会很支持你的，那样子我们也能学到很多陌生的知识，我全力支持哦~我会天天关注这个帖的了！
几天没看，今天看看，进步了
发表于2004-12-16 23:37
My main products are pocket knives and scissors,
also include the knife sets and tableware, ect.
My company is located in Yangjiang, Guangdong, P. R. China.
Yangjiang is a beautiful seaside city.
Produces knives in Yangjiang has been more than 1000 years.
（建议 Produces -->manufacturing,一般用xx manufacturing 来表示一个地方的产业．
这样，改为：
Knives manufacturing in Yangjiang has been more than 1000 years.)
My company was founded in 1994.
The 10 th anniversary of the founding of the company.(factory).
(最后一句好象不完整,我想你可能想表达到今年正好10周年,anniversary是周年纪念日,你要指出具体哪一天,这里没有写出来具体日子,所以不太合适.)
I am back --------AppleKing
我也来续
发表于2004-12-17 16:49
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第七句要表达的意思
发表于2004-12-17 20:04
The 10 th anniversary of the founding of the company.
原来想表达的意思是：公司成立己十周年了。
Produces knives in Yangjiang has been more than 1000 years.
这一句也有一个老师建议用这种表达方式：
Knives manufacturing in Yangjiang has been more than 1000 years.
谢谢班长的关爱！
